Task 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the hank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will he charged $70 which will he taken directly from y

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the hank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will he charged $70 which will he taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.
Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you
would like them to do about it.
You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir,

I am writing you in response to the letter I received from your bank few days ago stating that my account $240 overdrawn and I will be charged $70. I think this mistake is done by your employee.

As you know I was staying in a rented house and my rent directly transfer to the house owner account from my account. Last month I changed my house and I submit one application to you for not deposit the rent anymore to the owner. I have the acknowledgement from your bank of my application.But nothing was done.This month also money deducted from my account and same had been transferred to former owner.

However, I will request to my earlier house owner to return the money.I expect, you will take immediate action to this matter.

I look forward to receiving your response.

Yours faithfully,
Srihari.

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and my rent directly transfer to the house owner
and my rent directly transfers to the house owner

I submit one application to you for not deposit the rent anymore
I submit one application to you for not depositing the rent anymore

This month also money deducted from my account
This month also money is deducted from my account

flaws:
No. of Words: 148 200
Minimum 150 words wanted

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 148 200
No. of Characters: 646 1000
No. of Different Words: 86 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.488 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.365 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.483 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 41 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 33 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 15 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.5 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.432 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.85 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.22 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4