You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course write a letter to your college director requesting to change your course. What course are you doing. Why you not satisfied with that course. What course would you like to change.
Dear mr. Bhatiya,
recently I have got admission in English cooking class at c.b.r.g.. I am writing this letter regarding some difficulties. I am attending this class from last week. I would like to know if it is possible to change the course.
I know this is not the right time because one month has already gone. Due date for any changes was 26 April. But in my case it is totally change, because on the time of admission I don't know about these problems, which I am facing due to this high level of English. This course is not lucrative for me, because I don't understand what teacher is saying. It is beyond my comprehensible.
Thus I am requesting u please pay attention on my problem.and my enrolment transfered from English cooking class to hindi cooking class.
I am really very sorry this inconvenience. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
urvashi
but in my case it is totally change,
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
It is beyond my comprehensible.
It is beyond my comprehension.
Sentence: Thus I am requesting u please pay attention on my problem.and my enrolment transfered from English cooking class to hindi cooking class.
Error: enrolment Suggestion: enrollment
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