You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to show dissatisfaction from my roommate. As you know I have used your accommodation. They create a lot of disturbance during my exam session.
My college exam is on ahead. I am trying to study late-night but I cannot do this because I am living in share room. Furthermore, my roommates have a large friend circle. They visit in my room until late-night. Sometime they are come with their girlfriends then they are doing couple dance on music that distract me from my aim. I feel very uncomfortable when I see that they are dirty touch with each other in front of me. Sometime they are misbehaving with me that intolerable for me. Besides, they borrow my things without my permission.
I request you to change my room and also want to a single room for single person. I will appreciate you if you will understand my situation.
Yours Truly,
Kulwinder
I am living in share room.
I am living in a share room.
Sometime they are come with their girlfriends
Sometime they come with their girlfriends
and also want to a single room for single person.
and also want a single room for a single person.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 10
No. of Words: 159 200
No. of Characters: 713 1000
No. of Different Words: 102 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.551 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.484 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.749 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 42 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 27 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 10.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.45 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.533 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.348 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.12 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4