You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the m

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You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this issue.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this to complain about the delay of new cheque book that I had ordered a fortnight ago from your bank.

Please refer to my online requisition dated September 25th, 2015, wherein I made a request to obtain a novice cheque book from your bank after I ran out of leaflets in my existing cheque book. It has been assured in your website that the delivery of the cheque book would not take more than five working days. Since your assurance, I have been waiting for almost ten working days, but I have not received any information so far. Due to the delay, I am put into a...

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dated September 25th, 2015
dated on September 25th, 2015

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 194 200
No. of Characters: 840 1000
No. of Different Words: 121 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.732 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.33 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.523 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 37 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.636 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.688 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.182 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.725 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.12 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4