You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this issue.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this to complain about the delay of new cheque book that I had ordered a fortnight ago from your bank.
Please refer to my online requisition dated September 25th, 2015, wherein I made a request to obtain a novice cheque book from your bank after I ran out of leaflets in my existing cheque book. It has been assured in your website that the delivery of the cheque book would not take more than five working days. Since your assurance, I have been waiting for almost ten working days, but I have not received any information so far. Due to the delay, I am put into a...
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dated September 25th, 2015
dated on September 25th, 2015
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Category: Very Good Excellent
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