Amount spent on comsumer goods

Essay topics:

Amount spent on comsumer goods

The bar chart compares the expenditure on 6 types of products in 4 countries : Germany, Italy, France and Britain.

Overall, six different items were comsumed in Britain were the highest of other countries. In addition, consumers spent the most money on photographic film.

British people spent more money than German people in all 6 items. Photographic film was the most popular goods in both Britain and Germany, which was over 170 thousand pounds and just under 150 thousand pounds, respectively. The figure for spending on toys was the second highest. British people and German people were comsumed more than 145 pounds in that product. About remaining goods personal stereos, tennis racquets, perfumes and CDs, they efforted remain between 145 thousand pounds and approximately 160 thousand pounds.

In the other two nations, Italian spent more money on personal stereos, tennis racquets, perfumes than French, about 5 thousand pounds in each types. The volume of CDs and photographic film in France were higher than theese in Italy, which was over 4 thousand pounds in separately types. But the figure for consumed toys in both two nations were exactly the same at around 169 thousand pounds

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24870466321 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53231322446 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528497409326 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3077440834 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0909090909 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11693780504 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465288061168 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375421070791 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708558975663 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562255479644 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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