Answer the writing task 1 below The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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Answer the writing task 1 below : The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Both maps depict the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in the years 1980 and 2015 and the urban developments that took place. Overall, the area witnessed dramatic changes to the buildings and amenities. the town in 1980 was accommodated more green areas compare with the map in 2015, representing a modern industrialised city and equipped with packed facilities for a wide range of requirements. The most noticeable addition is the enormous square was built to the heart of the city. Apart from the location of the hotel, the Grocer's shop, block of flats and terraced houses in the nearby were replaced by a large car park and a new supermarket. To the South-West of the Fosbury, two tennis courts have been reconstructed into sports center which include more variety sports than the old one such as rugby, football.
Moreover, the natural views in the town have been demolished considerably between 1980 and 2015. It is clear that the vast field to the South-East of the town has been totally transformed into ware houses since 2015. Furthermore, terraced buildings were relocated to the western part of the city and the new park have been situated in an bare flat across the street.

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Average: 9.2 (4 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...the urban developments that took place. Overall, the area witnessed dramatic cha...
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...changes to the buildings and amenities. the town in 1980 was accommodated more gree...
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...ities for a wide range of requirements. The most noticeable addition is the enor...
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...an the old one such as rugby, football. Moreover, the natural views in the town ...
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Suggestion: a
... and the new park have been situated in an bare flat across the street.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, apart from, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86633663366 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71121308721 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608910891089 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7745096626 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.222222222 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128770751339 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551839869953 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739848183357 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992687835797 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186907110104 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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