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Writing test 1, cambridge 7:
The table illustrates how much the people in five countries namely Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey spent on dissimilar patterns in the year 2002. As can be seen from this table, it is clearly evident that most of the people choose food, drink and tobacco but this percentage was small with Leisure and education activities.
To begin with, the number of national consumer expenditure of Turkey keep a record, stood at roughly one-third per cent in Food, Drink and Tobacco. After that, this figure gradually declined in Ireland, Spain, Italy and Sweden with approximately 29, 19, 16,5 and 16 percent, respectively.
Turning to the Clothing and Footwear, It witnessed significant changes in all five nations. Especially, this number in Turkey decreased remarkably nearly 5 times. Therefore, Italy ranked at the top of this pattern with exactly 9 percent. Furthermore, remaining countries also declined about 3-4 times.
Moreover, we saw the dramatic drops in Leisure and Education. In details, Spain now breaks a record with a minimum data, 1.89%. And then, In Ireland, Sweden and Italy ranked later with 2.21, 3.2 and 3.22 percent, correspondingly. Additionally, Turkey came back with the biggest number on this item with 4.35%.
Considering all of the above, the number of people in Ireland and Turkey had a national consumer expenditure largest in five nations. On the other hand, this ratio reversed in Spain and Sweden. (222)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Writing test 1, cambridge 7: The table illustrates how much the peopl...
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... ratio reversed in Spain and Sweden. 222
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, third, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24894514768 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74560045348 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616033755274 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4923749487 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8571428571 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0854843572278 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320829269422 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414223435311 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0440719717921 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304312732978 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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