The emergence of the online “blogosphere” and social media has significantly weakened the quality of political discourse in the United States. Reason: When anyone can publish political opinions easily, standards for covering news and political topics will inevitably decline.
Write a response in which you examine your own position on the statement. Explore the extent to which you either agree or disagree with it, and support your reasoning with evidence and/or examples. Be sure to reflect on ways in which the statement might or might not be true, and how this informs your thinking on the subject.
As the de facto leader of the free world the political stance in the United states is always of keen interest to not only to the citizens of the country but also to the rest of the world. In the current age of internet communication many platforms like the "blogoshere" has emerged as the trend of news sharing and replacing the conventional medium of news media. The reason behind it might have arised from the distrust people has this days on the conventional news medias and their relentless spin-offs'. As a democratic country, the United States strongly believe in the freedom of speech. Although this right had influnced the check and balance with the government, its unregulated form has singnificant impact on the political issues. The conventional medias abide by a number of regulations which had been put their by keeping in mind the greater good of public. Now, one might argue that this blogosphere has somewhat removed the bias of the mass medias, but this personal political commentry hich doesnt need to adhere the regulations can bring more harm to the news it covers with personal prejudice.
If we focus on the presedential election of 2016, we can actually see the division in society about the political topics and news, who to believe, as the news were presented. different presedential candidate actually used the fear mongering technque to align more people to their agenda. Many political commentators expressed their opinion in favor of their favorable candidate and subjected other to calumny. Many false news was presented and could not be fact checked, which fomented so many controversy that it became a banal thing. although many conventional media tried to maintain their standard in this situation, still the distrust and favourable info to peoples assumption made them more align to what e can coin as "actual fake news". This created a big division in the daily american life.
not only in USA, but also in different asian countries where the socierty is dovoded by religious aspects, these personal opinions hen later might get turned into fake news resulted in many public unrest. Becasuse fact checking medium might not be availble to the common people. Thus it create more distrust then providng information.
However, one might argue that it is his or her right to express his or her opinion in what matter she choose. But without accountablity this might result in a chaos. With freedom comes responsibility. where the common mass medias are held accountable to every commentary they made, many personal opinion, which spread worldwide through the internet can not be brought to the same standard every time. Thus it may spread more false info & mass people who are unaware of this might caught between a dilemma who to trust.
From the discussion above it can be said that the current mode of communications has really made the flow of information and news more accessible and also made the conventional medias more accountable as how they tell describe the stories as there is always facts available. But the personal commentries which may be driven by personal agendas can actually harm and deteriorate the quality of the news and political issues they cover. Without proper regulation this might even result in further division in our society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ave arised from the distrust people has this days on the conventional news medias an...
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Suggestion: doesn't
... this personal political commentry hich doesnt need to adhere the regulations can brin...
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Suggestion: Different
...to believe, as the news were presented. different presedential candidate actually used th...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much false news', 'a good deal of false news'.
Suggestion: Much false news; A good deal of false news
...ndidate and subjected other to calumny. Many false news was presented and could not be fact che...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun controversy seems to be countable; consider using: 'many controversies'.
Suggestion: many controversies
... not be fact checked, which fomented so many controversy that it became a banal thing. although ...
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Suggestion: Although
...ntroversy that it became a banal thing. although many conventional media tried to mainta...
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Suggestion: Not
...division in the daily american life. not only in USA, but also in different asia...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'opinions'' or 'opinion's'?
Suggestion: opinions'; opinion's
...ed by religious aspects, these personal opinions hen later might get turned into fake ne...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun unrest seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much public unrest', 'a good deal of public unrest'.
Suggestion: much public unrest; a good deal of public unrest
...t get turned into fake news resulted in many public unrest. Becasuse fact checking medium might no...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...t not be availble to the common people. Thus it create more distrust then providng i...
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Suggestion: creates
... availble to the common people. Thus it create more distrust then providng information...
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...on people. Thus it create more distrust then providng information. However, one m...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
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...s his or her opinion in what matter she choose. But without accountablity this might r...
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...aos. With freedom comes responsibility. where the common mass medias are held account...
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Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ble to every commentary they made, many personal opinion, which spread worldwide through the int...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...rought to the same standard every time. Thus it may spread more false info & mass pe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... caught between a dilemma who to trust. From the discussion above it can be said...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, really, so, still, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 1.00243902439 1796% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 5.60731707317 713% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 33.7804878049 207% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2773.0 965.302439024 287% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 546.0 196.424390244 278% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07875457875 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 3.73543355544 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79497955949 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 106.607317073 259% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505494505495 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 867.6 283.868780488 306% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 8.94146341463 268% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4844425082 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.541666667 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212712127274 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530606193379 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551176378964 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11279152054 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699256724545 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 40.7170731707 317% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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