Bar Chart

Essay topics

The bar chart shows the information about the Internet users in different age groups from 1998 to 2000 in Taiwan.

The Internet users who were between 16 years old to 30 years old had the highest percentage, which was showing a decrease from about 53% to about 44 % in 3 years. The group aged from 31 to 51, ranked second, saw a decline of 5% , from 53% in 2998 to 45% in 1999, and then made up for 37% in 2000.

The percentages in rest groups are similiar, and both of them climed in this selected period. The Internet users under 15 years old rose from 2% to 9 %, while those over 50 years old grew from 3% to 10%. And in 1999, the two groups had the same percentage, around 8%.

Overall, more children and olders started to use Internet as a tool. However, people aged from 16 to 50 were still the majority of Internet users in Taiwan.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rom about 53% to about 44 % in 3 years. The group aged from 31 to 51, ranked second...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o 51, ranked second, saw a decline of 5% , from 53% in 2998 to 45% in 1999, and th...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...9, and then made up for 37% in 2000. The percentages in rest groups are similiar...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...of them climed in this selected period. The Internet users under 15 years old rose ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, still, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 685.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28125 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21856981308 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60625 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 188.1 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0161248385 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.625 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.063259237222 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348678181657 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922515756259 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697356363315 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120785665224 0.0819641961636 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 61.2550243902 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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