The bar chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004..Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart give information about the expenditures incurred on Food and Beverage, Hospitality and Entertainment by distinct age groups of residents in the United Kingdom in 2004.
According to the chart, during the period in 2014 the percentage categories in 46-60 to 61-75 age groups of entertainment dramatically increased, while food and restaurant saw a significant decline. However, we can see clear more if we look at he specific figures.
Look at the bar chart in 2004, the categories in 76 of Entertainment received 24% and by food and restaurant approximately 6% and 13%. Meanwhile, the percentage categories in 61-70 about 24% of Entertainment and Food And Drink significantly decreased when from 24% to 20%. During the following quarter, restaurant and hotel categories about 2% and lowest among three categories.
From under 30 to 60 age groups, the percentage in three categories in 31-45 and 46-60 years demonstrate a relatively lower expenditure behaviors with on significant 12% deviation from the under 30 age group. As age advances, there is perceptible increase in food and beverage expenses. Notably, those aged between 61-75 exhibit a discernible a version to hospitality-related expenses, instead opting to allocate 23% and 20%.

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Average: 8.9 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3807106599 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35302915348 2.65546596893 126% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573604060914 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5698317097 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.777777778 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199964951996 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855173742066 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695143478656 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135666309978 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632669878178 0.0819641961636 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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