The Bar Chart Below shows the most important causes of stress for different age groups in Canada.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featres, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates 4 most crucial causes of stress for 4 different age group in Canada.
It is apparent that while people age 65 and above mainly worried about health or had no specific reason, younger people who age 64 and below had struggle with working too much or inadequate income. It is also observed that people of all studied age groups frequently could not give a detailed reason for their stress.
People age between 65 and 74 and in their late 70s did not have particular reason of stress, at 32 and 35 out of 40 respectively, which was the majority of the causes. However, that of people between 55 and 64 was lower, at only 17 while that of people from the last age group was only 7, making it the lowest. The same pattern was also seen at health-related causes. Owning health problems was 23 out of 40 for the oldest age group while that of the youngest was about six times lower, at 4.
By contrast, people from two younger age group had a tendency to be stressful about overworking and the shortage of money. Excessive working made up 25 out of 40 at people between 25 and 40, while that of people between 55 and 64 was 15 out of 40. Oppositely, for people age between 65 and 74 and in their late 70s, the figure was much lower, at 3 and 1 respectively. The 25-54 age group worried about having inadequate money, at 15 which was five times higher than that of 75-and-above age group.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 263.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39163498099 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43445203166 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498098859316 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9379599264 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172025271083 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950236793229 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10855810809 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177426587515 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140913997698 0.0819641961636 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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