the bar chart provides information regarding the percentage of female and male in Australia who doing regular physical activity in different age in 2010
overall,most percentages of women doing regular physical activity outraced the men’s and it experienced a upward trend by the age.But initially,the percentage of women was fall behind men’s .Both of two percentages had some fluctuations.
men's exercise rate was 52.8% in age 15 to 24 being higher than women rate by approximately 5%,then it sharp decline to 42.2% in age 25 to 34,and hitting the low-point of 39.5% in age 35 to 44.However the rate started to a rising trend to 43.1% in age 45 to 54 and reaching 45.1% in age 55 to 64.men who beyond 64 years old had 46.7% regular physical activity rate.
47.7% of Australian women had regular physical activity in age 15 to 24.Then it outraced men's rate which grown to 48.9% in age 25 to 34 and increase by 2.6% in age 35 to 44.it remained constant in age 55 to 64 and fall to 47.1% in age 65 and over.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66850828729 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80622740405 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519337016575 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 22.4926829268 267% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1580598936 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 281.666666667 112.824112599 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.3333333333 22.9334400587 263% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 5.23603664747 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403078155835 0.215688989381 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.286344740126 0.103423049105 277% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10714886172 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277001315968 0.15604864568 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866812562004 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.7 13.2329268293 232% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.5 61.2550243902 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.3 10.3012195122 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.4329268293 262% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.9970731707 236% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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