The bar chart provides information regarding the rate of female and male in Australia who doing regular physical activity in different age in 2010
Overall, most rates of women doing regular physical activity exceeded men’s and it experienced an upward trend by the age. But initially, the percentage of women was fall behind men’s rate. Both of two percentages had some fluctuations.
Men's exercise rate was 52.8% in age 15 to 24, being higher than women’s rate by approximately 5%. then, it deeply declines to 42.2 percent in age 25 to 34 and hitting the low-point of 39.5% in age 35 to 44. However, the figure showed a gradual rising trend to 43.1% in age 45 to 54 and reaching 45.1% in age 55 to 64. Man who is beyond 64 years old had 46.7% regular physical activity rate.
47.7% of Australian women had regular physical activity in age 15 to 24 which was over 5 percent less than men. Then its outraced men's rate. It grown steadily to 48.9% in age 25 to 34 and increase by 3.6% in age 35 to 44. It gently inclines to 53.3 percent in age 45 to 54 and almost remained constant in age 55 to 64. Finally, the rate of women fall to 47.1% in age 65 and over.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Then
... women's rate by approximately 5%. then, it deeply declines to 42.2 percent in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45622119816 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57218824977 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539170506912 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.0223916551 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5833333333 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369287981757 0.215688989381 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130230481811 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952495464798 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257333104004 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626374784299 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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