The bar chart illustrates information regarding the rate of female and male in Australia who doing regular physical activity in different age in 2010
Overall, most rates of women doing regular physical activity exceeded men’s and it experienced an upward trend by the age. But initially, the percentage of women was fall behind men’s rate. Both of two percentages had some fluctuations.
Men was more positive to carry out persistent exercise in age fifteen to twenty-four that the rate was 53.9% which was higher than women’s rate by approximately 5%. It deeply declines to 42.2 percent in age twenty-five to thirty-four and hitting the low-point of 39.5% in age 35 to 44. However, the figure showed a gradual rising trend to 43.1% in age forty-five to fifty-four and reaching 45.1% in age 55 to 64. Man who is beyond 64 years old had 46.7% consistent physical activity percentages.
47.7% of Australian women had regular physical activity in age fifteen to twenty-four while it was over 5 percent less than men. Then its outraced men's percentages. It grown steadily to 48.9% in age twenty-five to thirty-four and increase by 3.6% in age 35 to 44. The percentages gently incline to 53.3 percent in age forty-five to fifty-four and almost remained constant in age 55 to 64. Almost as same as men’s percentages, 47.1 percent of women had consistent exercise in age 65 and over.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04721030043 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99854140034 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540772532189 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.2868936505 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343427806495 0.215688989381 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126030277986 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937212660632 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245193708021 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744763416397 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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