The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups, started from 15 to over 65 years old who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Overall, what stands out is that, although there were not significant differences between two genders, men and women followed vice versa trends. It means that the percentage off women activity why is lower and started to increase and then decrease again, while males were more active at first and then the percentage of their physical activity declined, finally it had been risen as they became older.
As can be seen, males at the age of 15 to 24 did more regular exercise in comparison with other men's age categories, with 52.8 per cent. it followed downward trend till the age of 35 to 44 years old which shows least amount of physical activity (39.5 per cent). Thereafter, it had been risen gradually after 44 to over 65 years old.
On the other hand, young adult females worked out less than males, but fortunately they had been become more active slightly as time went by untill 45 to 54 age group which was the time when women did highest rate of regular physical activity,with 53.3 percent and next it dipped very slowly.Interestingly, males and females virtually did similar range of activity when they were 65 and over, with 46.7 and 47.1 percent repectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83620689655 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63296806068 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594827586207 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.65233942 43.030603864 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.285714286 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1428571429 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389183551267 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174578487228 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163450110595 0.0843802449381 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261282877252 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170874115194 0.0819641961636 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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