The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
ielts process diagram
The diagram illustrates the process of electricity production by geothermal power planet. this way of electricity generation comprises of 5 steps.
Overall, what stands out is that hot rocks under 4.5 kilometers of earth surface have a crucial role in this process because water is following among them and its temperature goes up to an proper level.
As can be seen, there is a cold water reservoir which is pumped down to the 4.5 kilometers depths. The cold water is injected through injection well into the geothermal zone which is warm enough to increase the water temperature. At the end of this zone there is production well . Heated water must be transferred into the hot water reservoir which is condenser area. steam is produced in the condenser. Since, turbine should be powered by steam so as to rotate it. Finally, turbines power helps generator to work properly in order to make electricity. Consequently, electricity is generated and sent to the electricity cables for using in various ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... production by geothermal power planet. this way of electricity generation comprises...
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...net. this way of electricity generation comprises of 5 steps. Overall, what stands out i...
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...ong them and its temperature goes up to an proper level. As can be seen, there...
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...er reservoir which is pumped down to the 4.5 kilometers depths. The cold water is...
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...nd of this zone there is production well . Heated water must be transferred into t...
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...ater reservoir which is condenser area. steam is produced in the condenser. Since, tu...
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...nce, turbine should be powered by steam so as to rotate it. Finally, turbines power help...
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...s to rotate it. Finally, turbines power helps generator to work properly in order to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06586826347 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86180175712 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62874251497 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6708197297 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9090909091 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105232995227 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471761550834 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648606355607 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892675197762 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723592074974 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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