The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of men and women of different ages who did physical activity regularly in 2010 in Australia
it can be seen from the chart that the percentage of women doing regular physical activities exceeded those of men except of ages from 15 to 24. Additionally, the gap between them became larger as age got older from 25 to 44, and the gap started to shrink after 45 years old.
The percentage of women doing physical activities regularly was 47.7% between 15 and 24 years old. And the older women were, the larger percentage of them was engaged in regularly physical activities until 45 to 54 years old, which was up to 53.3%. then, 55 years old, the percentage began to fall, and only 47.1% of women older than 65 were engaged in physical activities regularly, which was the least among all ages.
With respect to men, up to 52.8% of men did regular physical activities from 15 to 24 years old, and it was the largest. then it started to shrink as men’s age got older, then it reached the bottom at 39.5% for men between 35 and 44 years old. However, the percentage increased again for men older than 45, and the percentage of men older than 65 doing regular physical activities was 46.7%, which was almost the same as that for women.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70742358079 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44830615101 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436681222707 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.253749875 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.75 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0234066175802 0.215688989381 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.015322356552 0.103423049105 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0139084582324 0.0843802449381 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.018697155874 0.15604864568 12% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00413435127464 0.0819641961636 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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