The comparison of physically demanding activities done by genders in various age groups in Australia over the year 2010 can be revealed as follows.
In general, most females beyond 24 years old have a positive mood for doing exercise on a daily basis while the reverse is true for males who are aged 15 to 24 years old.
As regards the first, the number of people who are aged 45 to 54 years old was the highest among females with 53.3%, nearly 10% higher than that of males at the same age. Moreover, the 45 to 64 years old females show their interest in working out frequently is much higher than that of their peer counterparts, accounting for around 53% for the former and 45% for the latter.
In contrast, having a fitness routine enjoyed widespread popularity among men between 15 to 24 years old is slightly higher than that of females with 52.8%, as opposed to 47.7% of females doing. Meanwhile, both genders from 65 years old onwards shared roughly balanced proportions aspect for daily exercise, which made up approximately 46% for each gender.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e year 2010 can be revealed as follows. In general, most females beyond 24 years...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, while, as regards, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75135135135 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4952021163 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643243243243 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 19.2757763931 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 146.5 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8333333333 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.23603664747 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0935462283309 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056960798824 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576923510571 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734024850328 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060156856388 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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