The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The bar chart depicts the proportion of Australian people who exercised regularly in 2010 by gender and age groups.
Generally speaking, although the percentage of people doing sport varied according to the age, more women than men did exercise in the given year, particularly between the ages of 35 to 44. Besides, men tended to do sport when they were at a young age or aged over 64 while the opposite picture was shown in females.
To specify, over half of the adult women (aged between 35 and 64) did a regular activity compared to much lower figures among the men. Only 39.5% of men between 35 and 44 which is the lowest figure on the chart worked out regularly. Meanwhile, the most active group women was at aged 45 to 54 with 53.3% doing physical activity on a regular basis. There was also a significant difference, by nearly 7%, in the patterns for men and women aged 25-34 though females still overweighed their males counterparts.
In comparison, only at the youngest age group (15-24 years old), there were more males than females doing exercise regularly although the difference is not noticeable, with 52.8% and 47.7% respectively. Strikingly, this figure was almost the same, at around 47%, for women and men over 65.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: DID_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean 'compare'?
Suggestion: compare
...etween 35 and 64 did a regular activity compared to much lower figures among the men. On...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... and 64 did a regular activity compared to much lower figures among the men. Only ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81220657277 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57224729964 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1865500709 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.888888889 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370031007708 0.215688989381 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152482900387 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824520072191 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224570700939 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775225637212 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.