The bar chart below shows the percentage of people living alone in five different age groups in the USA between 1850 and 2000.

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The bar chart below shows the percentage of people living alone in five different age groups in the USA between 1850 and 2000.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who lived alone in five age groups in the USA from 1850 to 2000
Overall, there were considerable upward trends for the number of people living by themselves in all ages groups. Another interesting point is that this figure for elders from 55-64 years old always made up the largest proportion over the period.
Looking at details, started with a similar point at over 2% for 37-54 years old and around 3% for 55-64 years old in 1850 the number of people stayed alone experienced the same trend over the period given. These groups still remained the three highest positions by 1950 with around 3% and 9% respectively and witnessed dramatic changes in 2000. This figures for age group 37-46 and 55-64 had a double jump to 7% and 17% compared to significant increase by 8% for group aged 47-54.
By the other hand, phenomenon that youngsters in the age of 17-26 and 27-36 who lived alone had appeared since 1950 and 1900 in turn. This figure for both groups grew remarkable, group 27-36 ranked the third place with 8% which was four times higher than its initial point compared to 5% for age group 17-26.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, still, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68137254902 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29115675359 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593137254902 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.6015500954 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.428571429 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1428571429 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252697530316 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125185023501 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134265852933 0.0843802449381 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218852045404 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.194703041458 0.0819641961636 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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