The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011.

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The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011.

The bar chart depicts that the figure who clear the high school competitive exam by gender and subject in the period of 2010 to 2011.

It is clear that, almost all subjects had high figure for girls except geography, where the number was higher for male. The highest number of girls complete the competitive exam in subject of computer science.

As the graph shows, the trend represented the figure for girls higher compared to boys in all subject. Only 42.1% boys passed computer science while 56.3% cleared this subject in examination that was the highest figure over the period as well as overall the subject. In terms of chemistry, the number for girls at 30.2%were nearly double than boys at 14.1%.

According to physics, history, foreign language and maths, there was slight higher number for girls at 36.7%, 25.6%, 47.4% and 49.2% in compare to boys at 34.6%, 22.9%, 46.8 and 48.4% respectively in 2010-11. Meantime, reference to subject of geography, the number of male students who cleared the exam stood at 30.4% since only 20.1% was accounted for girls. This subject was only considered in which the trend showed the reverse in compareto other subjects.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98979591837 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33539753204 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540816326531 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.560157509 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182691078035 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938290271474 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121455986609 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163064409685 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151794716871 0.0819641961636 185% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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