The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart capture the information about citizens of top ten countries made and utilized their electricity in different amount. Overall, it is clear that China was the highest while Korea was the lowest. On the other hand, interestingly, Germany was higher in deplete than augment their electricity.

In 2014, China was world leader in electricity production and consumption with over 5000 billion kWh for each. The USA was in second with over one-fifth less than China. The rest of the Top 5 – Russia, Japan, and India – generated and used up about four to five times less power than China or the USA.

According to the graph, Canada was the sixth countries that produce and spend its energy with over 600 billion kWh producing and 500 billion kWh spending. Furthermore, both France and Brazil which were in the seventh and eight placed were in similar amounts for brewed and wiled their electricity. In the ninth-place, Germany was the only country whose higher usage than produced. Finally, Korea was the bottom of top ten countries for both manufacturing and consuming its power.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'placed' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'places'.
Suggestion: places
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, second, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98360655738 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57834336724 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595628415301 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0381424193 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130216708604 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578101458529 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713427810661 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921985075408 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169932037422 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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