The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar graph illustrates the information about the electricity provision and demand of top ten countries in the world in 2014. Units are measured in billion kilowatts per hour. Overall, many countries have been enough electricity power production for their day today activities and industrial services.

Furthermore, China was got first place of power production and consumption in 2014 and it was approximately 5 billion kWh and nearest 5 billion kWh respectively. The second place has been got united state which has a maximum difference between power generate and usage so it was merely 1.5 billion kWh. Indian people annually generated exactly 871 billion kWh but, they had used approximately 700 billion so India had power redundancy in 2014. However, Germany was not similar to other countries because power consumption of Germany was exceeded than power generating in Germany also it had been needed a power production approximately 60 billion kWh. Indeed, The lowest electricity breeding and consumption were represented in Korea and it was just under 500 billion kWh.

To sum up, electricity invention and utilisation were largely different country by country.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...he world in 2014. Units are measured in billion kilowatts per hour. Overall, many count...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42076502732 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97480637374 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.096732514 43.030603864 286% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.333333333 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 5.23603664747 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205876041345 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123177146766 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105677563678 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169287265808 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103114185165 0.0819641961636 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.2329268293 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 61.2550243902 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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