The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The bar chart compares how much electricity is produced and consumed by the top ten nations worldwide in 2014.
Overall, China was the largest manufacturing and consuming country in terms of electricity all around the world in the year surveyed. It is clear that Germany was the only country in the top ten ranks consumed power more than producing it.
In the year 2014, the respective amounts of electricity produced and used in China were 5.398 and 5.322 billion kWh. Following it was the U.S with 4.099 and 3.866 billion kWh of generated and consumed electricity, respectively, which were many times higher than those of the other countries in the top ten rank.
Turning to the eight remaining nations, the production and consumption of electricity in Russia, which was in the third place, were relatively similar, around 1.000 billion kWh each. Meanwhile, the amount of electricity used in Japan, right after Russia in the rank, was about 100 billion lower than that which was generated in the country. The figure of disparity between the two categories in India, the fifth nation, was 200 billion kWh. The electricity generation and usage observed in Canada, France, and Brazil were not significantly different, between 450 billion and 620 billion. In 2014, Germany consumed 582.5 billion kWh of electricity but produced only 526.6 billion kWh. Finally, 485.1 and 449.5 billion kWh of electricity were generated and used for different purposes in Korea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...322 billion kWh. Following it was the U.S with 4.099 and 3.866 billion kWh of gen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, third, while, in the third place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69975557745 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525210084034 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4755594185 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.0 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218246877911 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117179125125 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850913579568 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174281437689 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848252287285 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.