Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinions
People have different views about whether mental strength or physical strength plays more vital roles in achievements in sporting competitions. In my opinion, both of them are equally important factors for getting targets of sports professionals.
To begin with, there are several reasons why a person can be successful in a match if he has a strong mind. It is clear that one who is relaxed and comfortable during the competition may get a higher result than those who are obsessed with scores and achievements. For instance, the Vietnamese volleyball team in the national competition nearly lost the game but members put more effort to fight against the fear and the competitor, and finally, they turned things over and became the champion that year. Additionally, it is common that before a sports match, organizers usually use vibrant songs not only to encourage participants but also to relieve their stress. Cheer-up groups are also a good example of the positive impacts of mental strength on success in sports.
However, I believe that becoming strong and fit also a necessary factor to get high places in a sports league. Participants usually have to undergo appropriate training courses under proper instructions to enhance stamina before officially participating in a tournament. Vietnamese football teams, for instance, have attended intense training courses with soccer professionals around the world for a long time to gain more experience as well as to keep strong and fit enough for a long match before joining SEAGAMES. A newcomer would lose a game and even get injured if he is not well-prepared in terms of physical strength regardless of how is his psychological strength. Therefore, being well-trained to enhance physical limitations is important for a successful sports player
In conclusion, it seems to me that both mental and physical strength is vital in deciding the achievements of athletes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24350649351 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02024672586 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.9547017029 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.583333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271470590199 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935182041088 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759396130375 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170686961869 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103744198629 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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