The supplied bar chart depicts the manufacturing and usage of elecricity in top ten countries in 2014. Overall, the China and USA , in terms of production and consumption of electricity is the main leaders, with multiple times higher than other named countries. Furthermore, the main trtend was production rate being larger, in comparison with consumption, in Germany situation is opposite.
A glance of chart reveals that, China was the head of the list with almost 5400 billion kWh produced and about 5320 billion kWh used. The situation was similar to the USA where production constituted 4090 billion kWh and consumption was approximately equal to 3900 billion kWh. Also, Russia, Japan and India were included in Top 5, with dramatically smaller levels for production and consumption.
The second top 5 started by Canada with 619 billion kWh of producing and 500 billion of consuming, whereas the level of Brazil and France were similar with around the 500 and 400 billion kWh. The only exception was Germany with more electricity consumed, then produced. Lastly, Korea finishes top 10 with both rates under 500 billion kWh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, lastly, second, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17486338798 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78790575132 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5841163547 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.285714286 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138613249272 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842268607017 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643933334535 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113061268735 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816644245703 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.