Given is a pie chart depicting the most important factors for immigration and emigration from the UK in 2007. Looking at chart, it is apparent that the main reason for migration to and from the UK was a definite job, whereas the people who came to and from UK without any reason was not so popular.
From the given pie chart we can see that employment is a primary reason for both aspects. Having a definite job is equal to 30% of immigration to the UK, which is very similar to emegration at 29%. Nearly quarter of all emigrators came to the UK looking to the job, surprisingly only 12% of UK citizens left their countries with similar purpose.
It can be seen from the data that another crucial factor to move to the United Kingdom was a formal study, with over a quarter of people immigrating for this reason. However, only a small minority whicg is constituted 4% left for this.
The percentage of moving to join the family was quite similar for both aspects, 15% and 13% respectively. It is necesarry to mention that one third of all people gave other reason or did not give a reason why they emigrated, this accounted for only 17% with regards to immigration.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ithout any reason was not so popular. From the given pie chart we can see that...
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...their countries with similar purpose. It can be seen from the data that anothe...
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...whicg is constituted 4% left for this. The percentage of moving to join the fam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5141509434 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57065951009 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.259189378 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24812233685 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106483397552 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856056771877 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155193239359 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106099014484 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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