The provided bar chart illustrates the Gross Domestic Product generated from the IT and Service Industry in the UK over the course of eight years starting from 1992. Units are measured in percentage.
A glance at the graph reveals that while both sectors increased as a percentage of total GDP, the IT industry grew at a far more rapid rate when compared to the service sector.
At the beginning of the given period, the IT industry accounted for roughly 6% of GDP, exceeding that of the other sector which stood at exactly 4%. Over the next four years, both sectors experienced overall growth as a proportion of total GDP, despite a slight reduction for IT between 1994 and 1996. While IT remained the larger of the two sectors, the gap between them shrank to around 1%, half of what it had been.
However, after 1996, the pattern of the two components was noticeably different. The IT sector witnessed a swift rise to just over 12% in 1998 before soaring to a new peak of almost 16% in 2000. Meanwhile, the percentage of the Service industry only increased slightly over the past years, contributing roughly 8% at the end of the period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71144278607 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52708894975 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592039800995 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.86095809 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.222222222 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953536198313 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367725554429 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529450943088 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647558272434 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591592187248 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.