The bar chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014

Essay topics:

The bar chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The given bar chart provides information on 10 of the most electricity produced and consumed countries in the year of 2014.

Overall, China took the first place in both categories of producing and consuming electricity, while Korea Rep. was placed last.

In 2014, there were 2 countries that had the most electrical production and usage. Placing first was China with the number of 5398 billion kWh electrical production as well as 5322 billion kWh electrical usage. Coming in close second was the United States. The country produced over 4000 billion kWh and consumed almost 400 billion kWh of electricity in the same year.

Russia, Japan and India respectively took the third, fourth and fifth place ranking with the amount of electricity generated and consumed varied from over 600 billion kWh to over 1000 billion kWh.

The sixth, seventh, eighth and ninth rank subsequently belonged to Canada, France, Brazil, and Germany with not that much of a difference between the quantity of electrical yielding and usage.

Korea Rep. in 2014 placed last in the ranking with only over 400 billion kWh of electricity made and used.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, third, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15675675676 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56437354677 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556756756757 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 101.999803921 43.030603864 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 106.0 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173918605864 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859979921745 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100167949417 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098388545004 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936857239456 0.0819641961636 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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