The bar charts below show the marriage and divorce statistics for nine countries in 1981 and 1994.

Essay topics:

The bar charts below show the marriage and divorce statistics for nine countries in 1981 and 1994.

The given bar charts reveal information about that the statistic of mariage and divorce count of number by eight nations during the year of 1981 and 1994. The data is calibrated in number.

The overall pattern amerging task type highlights the marriage statistic category it was highest then the divorce statistic per thousand to individulas.

It can crystal clear seen that, the highest statistical data was in the USA of divorce category almost five thousand living souls in the year to 1981. Whereas, in Japan divorce statistic count number to 1.5 thousand to per people while instead in UK divorce category to take double count in the year 1981 and 1994. Moreover, in Finland, Germany and France divorce statistic number to count almost equal trend in the year 1981 and 1994, respectively. In addtion, in Italy near about 5 thousand had took divorce in the year 1981 and 1994. It was measured that the number of Denmark population was same divorce case during the year 1981 and 1994.

As for as trend was concerned, in USA marriage statistic the number of counted (10 thousand) and it was double than Denmark(5 thousand) people in the 1981. In 1981 the count of people who got marriage did not cross the 6 thousand in Japan, Finland, Germany, France and also Italy.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...4. The data is calibrated in number. The overall pattern amerging task type high...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the highest'.
Suggestion: was the highest
...ghts the marriage statistic category it was highest then the divorce statistic per thousand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, then, whereas, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87614678899 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41147011499 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45871559633 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3954424379 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.3 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295899164994 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139461831111 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662523586172 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191448638285 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414365930903 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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