The bar charts below show the Marriage and Divorce Statistics for eight countries
in 1981 and 1994. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing
the information shown below.
The Marriage and Divorce Statistics in the year 1981 and 1994 is delineated in the given bar chart. The statistics is calculated from the total of eight countries in the world.
In the year 1981, American, British and Japanese people got married in the range of 11, 7 and 6. 5 respectively. Moreover, the people from Finland(6), Germany(6), France(5. 5) and Italy(5. 5) recorded almost an equal amount of marriage statistics. However, the people from Denmark reported the least amount of getting married. As in regard to Divorce Statistics, the Americans got divorced almost twice as much as the people from Denmark and the United Kingdoms. Likewise, the people from Finland and Germany got divorced at the rate of 2.
In the other hand, in the year 1994, there was approximately equal quantity of getting married for the people from the countries Finland(5), Germany(5. 5), Italy(5) and UK(6)and Japan(6). On the contrary, the Americans and the people from Denmark got married and divorced in the highest rate as compared to other countries.
Thus, maximum amount of people getting married and divorced was in the USA and roughly least in Italy.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, likewise, moreover, thus, in regard to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98947368421 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62875638103 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478947368421 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7727085987 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9230769231 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6153846154 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14820079285 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560731480877 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755550586788 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119501368859 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107016543234 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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