The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on,
above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting
the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram delineates that how the water cycle works. The water cycle circulation is intrinsic in the formation of the water.
Overall, it can be inferred that there are mainly 4 vital steps in the process of water cycle. These are cloud production, precipitation, surface runoff and condensation of the water vapor. Moreover, the cycle manifests the water‘s journey after falling to the ground further into the saltwater intrusion.
The sun plays the crucial role in condensing of the water vapor that leads to the creation of the cloud. After the cloud production, the water is precipitated in the form of rainfall on the impervious layer. However, the rain that is precipitated and the snow that is melted render further and gets accumulated to three parts via surface runoff. The water can get collected in the lakes, ocean and ground. The water that is collected in the ground is known as groundwater.
On the other hand, the evaporation can be considered as the most substantial step taking place in the water cycle. In the production of the cloud, the water comprising in various sources evaporates to form again the water vapor. Moreover, about 80 % of the total water moisture is contributed from the ocean.
The final stage of the process is saltwater intrusion, where water from the ocean moves to the freshwater aquifers. Thus, it can be manifested that, the steps from condensing the water fog continues and repeats thus, known as the water cycle.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02040816327 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71772213742 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489795918367 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.33902439024 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5619398438 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21412331504 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920366439083 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436291362453 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149223621258 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447210984907 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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