The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on,
above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting
the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram delineates that how the water cycle works.
Overall, it can be inferred that there are mainly 4 vital steps in the process of water cycle. These are cloud formation, precipitation, surface runoff and condensation of the water vapor.
The sun plays the crucial role in condensing of the water vapor that leads to the formation of the cloud. After the cloud production, the water is precipitated in the form of rainfall on the impervious layer. However, the rain that is precipitated and the snow that is melted collects further to three parts via surface runoff. The water can get collected in the lakes, ocean and ground.
The water that is collected in the ground is known as groundwater. Evaporation is the most substantial step that is taking place in the water cycle. The water comprising in various sources evaporates to form again the water vapor and subsequently formation of the cloud. Moreover, about 80 % of the total water vapor is contributed from the ocean. Likewise, the steps from condensing the water vapor continues and repeats thus, known as the water cycle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...llected in the lakes, ocean and ground. The water that is collected in the groun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, likewise, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99453551913 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71293112226 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513661202186 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.3522051945 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.1666666667 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193025809966 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877082521147 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378856568012 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14088773095 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296864073732 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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