The bar charts below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
Here, we have a set of one bar graph. The graph spells out the information pertaining production and consumption of top ten countries the year of 2014.
Overall, Germany is one who use of electricity rather than its production. Production and consumption are measured in billion kWh. In this bar graph respected countries are like China, United State, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea, Rep.
Start with the China and United State; they both have a good source of electricity. China and United State produced electricity 5,398 and 4,099 billion kWh respectively. However they both have electric consumption and they represented 5,322 and 3866 billion kWh respectively. In Russia there was miracle in 2014. Like in that year Russia produced 1,057 billion kWh electricity however in this year they consumption all most of the electricity which they was produced.
On the contrary, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil and Korea, Rep. they all are produced limited electricity. However they have less consumption and save the electricity in 2014. In addition Germany is the one who have less production and consumption of electricity is higher in the year of 2014. Relevant position is like 526.6 billion kWh for production and 582.5 billion kWh for consumption.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27669902913 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.833891443 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466019417476 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6856688659 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6428571429 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261440414727 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988864353685 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896946508575 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188422748426 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718789785515 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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