Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world,
subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are split opinion regarding to school subjects. Some people believe that History is most important for students,
while others group of thinkers suggest that Science and Technology are more important than History. However, both have
its owns pros and cons. Therefore, I discuss both the views and give my opinion with example.
On the one hand, some people say that history is good subject for students. In this students must be growing a
knowledge about past incident which is very important , and also to get knowledge of experience that happened in
the past. However, history is a subject that only give us past knowledge and i think students did not get enough
knowledge about what is happening in present world. In developed countries are skip history subject are rarely
studied in school curriculum. For instance, in USA, students are no longer studying in the subject of history
however government should also provide a spacial course related to history. Nowadays all schools focus on technology
that's why history is on the line of abolished.
On the other hand, i along with other group who believe that Science and Technology are more emergent compare to
History. Nowadays Science and Technology has advanced a lot, students are also shown interest in this. Moreover,
Science is the only way to give a solutions which is very difficult. For example, a very dangerous diseases is
impact our health but vaccine is protect us from that diseases and provide us a health shield. Hence, that's why
some diseases are extinction in the world. Such as, diseases like polio are no more in the world.
In addition, nowadays human life is totally depend on technology. Like, if they want any product, so, they
receive only just one click with help of smart phone. Now different application is available for any area. So, yes
i think if students are focus on this subject then they definitely get a good knowledge. Perhaps, one of those
students is the next scientist, well know technician who have an ability to change a society.
To sum up, i think Science and Technology is the best way to help a people to growing a more knowledge and students
have a chance to build a good career. However, history is quite good subject for students but that subject provide
limited knowledge compare to Science and Technology.
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...ut past incident which is very important , and also to get knowledge of experience...
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...ct that only give us past knowledge and i think students did not get enough kno...
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...ifficult. For example, a very dangerous diseases is impact our health but vaccine is p...
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...or example, a very dangerous diseases is impact our health but vaccine is protect...
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...ide us a health shield. Hence, thats why some diseases are extinction in the worl...
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...ddition, nowadays human life is totally depend on technology. Like, if they want any p...
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...ion is available for any area. So, yes i think if students are focus on this sub...
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... a good knowledge. Perhaps, one of those students is the next scientist, well kno...
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...lity to change a society. To sum up, i think Science and Technology is the bes...
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...to growing a more knowledge and students have a chance to build a good career. Ho...
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...ct for students but that subject provide limited knowledge compare to Science and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00763358779 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55057326881 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47582697201 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2424483723 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5652173913 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0869565217 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47826086957 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393795145682 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103363680198 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896825150839 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10420226709 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776910583937 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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