Bar graph

Essay topics:

Bar graph

The provided bar graphs demonstrate the information about the causes of study among learners of different age groups and support they gained from employees.The data is measured in percentage.

It is clear that the largest amount of students do study for interest in different age groups,whilist for career they have the lowest reasons for study.

The data clearly indicate that 80% of learners prefer to study under 26,while only 10% students like to do study for their interest.Surprisingly,same figure is followed by 26-39 age group which is 70% for career and 15% for interest.Moving ahead,age group 40-49 have a smilar amount of reasons to do study for both cases about 40%.Afterthat,for interest 70% students do study ,whereas for career it half that of for interest.

Moving towards the further details,under 26 learner get approximately 62% of employer support. The most striking feature is that the relatively similar ration is followed by other age group which is 42% in over 49 age group.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33374483057 2.65546596893 126% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.703695779 43.030603864 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.2 112.824112599 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0518223450438 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439021901617 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878043803234 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548777377022 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950510299046 0.0819641961636 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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