Modern education and traditional books
It is true fact that education leads us from darkness to light and opens up numerous avenues of growth and fullness of life.Hence, youth can enhance their knowledge by reading books, magazines and so on. In my opinion, this method both have positive and negative impact on the modern system of education which i will mention in forthcoming paragraphs.
On the brighter side, if children read any kind of book, it can help them to build up their vocabulary through this they can easily do cope up with modern education system as in present scenario educatio is too advanced and if a child wants to acquire each and every thing regarding to their education for this they have a great to read some extra material by themselves , as a consequence it is very fruitful for the modern education.according to the research carried out by 'The times of india' in 2015 ,80%learners gave preferance to read books by this they become more able to understand the modern techniques of today's education.
On the darker side, there are various type of problems occured for the smart classes.First and foremost reason is that if juveniles read more traditional books thus it put the influence on the new education system as they spend their time on reading books therefore they do not give proper attention on the smart classes.In the result, it reduces the significance of new educatio system. Another point is that youngsters are not able to show interest in modern system of education as they become habitual of reading paper books because they can easily understand through the books as compared to e-books.Finally,smart classes also put the effects on the children health with this sometimes they may suffer from eye problems, back pain and so forth. Due to this, youngsters avoid to use new system of education.
To summarize, from my prespective, reading paper books have more advantages as it helps the youth to increase their concentration and well-knowledged about particular subject, however, importance of modern techniques of education system we cannot deny.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, kind of, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05278592375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95728542558 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533724340176 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.137030898 49.4020404114 355% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 246.142857143 106.682146367 231% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.7142857143 20.7667163134 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304149505411 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13547980414 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726386916439 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189293366672 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356362116089 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.7 13.0946893788 204% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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