The bar graph below shows the literacy levels of males and females in rular and urban india in 2013 2015 and 2017

Essay topics:

The bar graph below shows the literacy levels of males and females in rular and urban india in 2013, 2015 and 2017.

The given bar chart illustrates the rates of literacy of Indians in 2013, 2015, and 2017. It is categorized according to their gender and locations, whether in rular areas or urban.

Overall, it can be seen that males have a higher level of literacy than females, and those who live in urban areas have better reading and writing skills than those who live in rular areas.

Regarding men, those who live in countrysides had significantly lower literacy rates than their counterparts in urban cities. The level of literacy in rular males had increased sharply from %57.87 to %77.15 over the three years, while the rate of literacy in urban areas rose gradually from %81.09 to %88.76 by 2017.

The literacy rates of rular females were considerably lower than females who live in urban cities. The level of literacy in rular-dwelling grew dramatically from %30.62 in 2013to %46.13 in 2015 to %57.93 in 2017. In comparison to urban females, literacy levels grew from %64.05 in 2013 to %79.11 by 2017

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'lowed', 'lowered'.
Suggestion: lowed; lowered
... live in countrysides had significantly lower literacy rates than their counterparts ...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... than females who live in urban cities. The level of literacy in rular-dwelling gre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94674556213 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56327099245 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520710059172 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0669361818 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367017135542 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177554520215 0.103423049105 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652013293993 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237229462129 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842584049786 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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