Below is a chart showing incidence of serious crime in a large UK city from December to november. Total incidences of violent crime are show in addition to incidences of 4 serious crime types.
At fleeting glance the line graph depicts the information regarding four serious crimes namely anti - social behaviour, violent crime, robbery and criminal damage in a large UK city from december to november.
Overall, the most striking feature apparent from this presentation is that the maximun crime rates were witnessed by anti - social behaviour. However, the uncausal feature that cannot be ignored that minimum crime cases were seen by criminal damage.
Highlighting the presentation it is clear that, the biggest problem in this city is that of anti - social behaviour. It was around 400 in december and slightly down in the mid of february. After february the incidents of anti - social behaviour was fluctuated before rising at about 700 in october. In november the cases of anti - social behaviour was gradually decreased.
Moreover, after anti - social behaviour came violent crime. Total incidences of violent crimes were 200 a month through out the year. Robbery and criminal damage were least crime in this city around 200 cases were witnessed following the year
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d slightly down in the mid of february. After february the incidents of anti - social...
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Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...nces of violent crimes were 200 a month through out the year. Robbery and criminal damage w...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'were the least'.
Suggestion: were the least
...t the year. Robbery and criminal damage were least crime in this city around 200 cases wer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35882352941 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62304999393 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570588235294 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6563320517 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260340509958 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109166281834 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883288595511 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17230060815 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871101060397 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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