The carts below give the information about workforce composition in the UK and about average hourly earnings

Essay topics:

The carts below give the information about workforce composition in the UK, and about average hourly earnings.

The graphs illustrate the data on the composition of the workforce in the United Kingdom and the average payment in an hour.

Overall, most of the British employee is full-time men and just small fraction is part-time men. Both male and female received higher payment in full-time work.

In the total of workforce almost a 25 million in the UK, almost a half that of proportion is full-time men (45%), while just over a quarter is female full-timer (28%). In contrast, women are likely to have a bigger composition of the part-time job than men, while the former accounts 21%, the letter is 6%.

The figure of the hourly earning shows the amount of payment was higher in the 8 hours job than a part-time job. A full-timer man was paid at around 13 euro per hour, whereas the female received lower 2 euros that of men. However, the female part-timer was paid higher than male on a part-time job, while female received 8 euros, the male was compensated 7.5 euros.

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Average: 9.2 (6 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...imer man was paid at around 13 euro per hour, whereas the female received lower 2 eu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63742690058 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50323821605 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538011695906 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0040406668 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0830586464532 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484354694625 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605004476325 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748034600378 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727116741431 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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