Here, the chart demonstrates the information about fruits and vegetables which consume per day by UK citizens over the period of 8 years, units are measured in percentage.
overall, at a fleeting glance, It is manifest that the most striking citizen is Women which dominance the market, howbeit, children are made the least proportion to intake the fruits and vegetables.
At a first glance, the chart reveals that the initially, during the period from 2001 to 2003, the percentage of children consume hyganic items were presented well above 10% then in the remaining years by passing the period, the trend modestly inclined and reached to just below 25% during the end of the stipulated period. It is also interesting to note that the although the ratio of women to intake fruits and vegetables were nearly 27%, yet it slightly increased till 2005 at 30%, the similar proportions can be observed in the year 2007 but after reached to the peak at 35%.
Further analysis of the chart portrays that the percentage of fruits and vegetables by men was overwhelming increased in all the given year, starting from roughly 27% and settling to considerably just above 25%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Overall
...ars, units are measured in percentage. overall, at a fleeting glance, It is manifest t...
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...ren consume hyganic items were presented well above 10% then in the remaining yea...
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Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the although the'. Did you mean 'although the'?
Suggestion: although the
...od. It is also interesting to note that the although the ratio of women to intake fruits and veg...
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Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...uits and vegetables were nearly 27%, yet it slightly increased till 2005 at 30%...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e nearly 27%, yet it slightly increased till 2005 at 30%, the similar proportion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95918367347 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65633628311 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4318257221 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 194.4 112.824112599 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.2 22.9334400587 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183085457854 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100312632284 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652438546367 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116278518891 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650002390586 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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