Education is a rudimentary criteria, each and every human being need to acquire owing to it will not only get benefit to the specific person but also that of nation. It is generally considered that whether to ameliorate the schooling system pupils are motivated to create voilence and pressure on the mentors or should be maintained the respect and etiquette in the classroom. This has been sparked heated debate on both sides office essay, in favor and against.
on the one hand, it is often argued that the Education system should be form in accurate manner to spread the knowledge towards the young generation students and in some countries education system has been vanished due to the fact of irresponsibilities mentors so, whenever tutees will lead to brutality and force to their mentors that make us to study and provide better knowledge then it would be emphasize on Guru. As a result, upcoming generation will definitely alter the future and achieve a fruitful result. To epitome, in 2017, in one of the Indian student school, similar circumstances had been Occurred related to the students and teachers.
On the other hand, other few people advocate that if student will perform this type of unwanted activities towards the Tutor then in history of education field the respect of mentors will basically disappear rather than doing this, some rules and regulation which had been declared by education department that ought to be adhered and if any of these rules would be not followed then department should take serious action for that case. To cite in relevant example, in Canada, a number of education department Sector is following all the rules.
To conclude, although the students have a right to raise their voice whenever they cannot get proper education, yet do not respecting the teachers and creating violence in the school area is not an appropriate method.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02236421725 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67337888241 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578274760383 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.276090159 49.4020404114 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.666666667 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.7777777778 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244404700922 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886027280494 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384185125198 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136389301578 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022997833396 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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