The chart below gives attendance figures for Grandville Stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project.
The chart provides information on a number of attendees for Grandville stadium from 2017, which are expected to improve through 2030 after a project is developed. On analysing the graph, there will be an increase in the population attending the stadium in future.
Although all the three events have a slight increase in attendees in 2020, on the other hand, there is a huge development in the Theatre and Concert crowd in 2030.
While in 2017, Theatres crowd was 10000 and it improved more than 40000 in 2030. Attendees in Sporting was less than 150000 in 2017 and it managed to reach more than 150000 in 2030. Moreover, There was a dramatic increase in Concerts, which was less than 50000 in 2017 and is expected to reach 10000 in 2030.
Overall, After the improvement activity, there is a raise in attendees in all events, but the crowd in Concerts in 2030 is twice as that of 2017.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...in the population attending the stadium in future. Although all the three events hav...
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Line 13, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vents, but the crowd in Concerts in 2030 is twice as that of 2017.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73885350318 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51470582479 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522292993631 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5413737445 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.285714286 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302845290227 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149271027907 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160685041505 0.0843802449381 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186571913063 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165791184642 0.0819641961636 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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