The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car schemes in 2008 and 2016

Essay topics:

The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016.

The given column graph illustrates the distribution of global car sharing usage (in percentage) by two specific years 2008 and 2016 across six different domains.

Overall, what stand out from the chart is that the trend of car sharing was most popular in Europe during initial year, whereas in last year it became favorable in North America. Furthermore, other areas showed considerably less interest in car sharing.

Firstly, in terms of the most significant feature of the graph, in North America, figure stood at just over 30% in 2008, while after eight years number rose strikingly to around 52%. Secondly, another important point is that the rate of sharing car was declined in Europe from just under 60% to nearly a half that of 2008.

By stark contrast, the least number of car sharing showed in South America, Australia, and Asia. Moreover, there was a slight rise in figure by 2% in these three areas through out the period. The noteable point is that the proportion was stayed under 6% in all these regions during the time span.

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Average: 7.4 (23 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: throughout
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87640449438 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41426660646 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634831460674 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0024037721 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.23603664747 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15191669376 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062051405692 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553307999087 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097107941014 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563966818496 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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