The plans below show the layout of a university sports Centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
The assinged two pictures illustrate the changes which will take place in the university sports center, first plan shows present sports area and second depicts future plan.
Overall, what stands out from the maps is that the area of sports center will be increased with the introduction of new facilities such as leisure pool, sport hall, dance studios, changing rooms ect.
Firstly, start with the most striking feature of the pictures, there is two outdoor courts either side of sports center; it will be removed in order to make a large leisure pool to the west of sports center. Secondly, on the place of right side outdoor court, one sports hall near to the seating and two dance studios will be constructed to the east of sports center. Moreover, the size of gym will be enlarged to the east direction.
Furthermore, it can be seen that two changing rooms will be added, one to the south-west and another to the south-east. Besides, there will be one sports shop and a cafe opened to the left and right side of entrance, respectively. Interestingly, there will be no changes in a pool, seating area and changing room which are located to the middle area of the sports center.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78155339806 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48415185985 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529126213592 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7155943156 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.125 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 5.23603664747 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172886552931 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934584762509 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592242209872 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13176755145 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639401467474 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.