Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this concurrent world, it is undoubtedly true that we are facing numerous environment problems; there are plethora of reasons behind environment damage. Some people concur that the risks for endangered plants and wildlife are the most severe consequences of our worsening environment, whereas others would argue that other problems are more pressing. However, I quibble from them and propound that the loss of wildlife is the most serious threat to the environment. This essay intends to analyse both perspectives before a logical conclusion is reached.
Adequate evidences are obtainable to substantiate the concept of why flora and fauna is important for us. The top-notch concrete reason is that plants are provided sufficient amount of oxygen and also reduce the carbon dioxide from the atmosphere. Today, thousands of tress are demolished in order to make new residential area. As a result, nowadays the global warming is increasing at unprecedented level. To uphold my notion I would quote an instance of survey which was published by IIT Delhi; the proportion of pollution and global warming is climbed by 30% from last decade. Secondly, another rationale is that the rising number of endangered animals in recent decades. Animals are part of our eco cycle, if they are distinct then our natural system will be disturbed.
Conversely, some people tend to distinguish that there are many other factors which affects environment. To commence with, some people deem that nature disaster like tsunamis, earthquakes and windstorm which are results of environment degradation. However, these disasters are directly linked with distinction of plants and animals.
All in All, I reiterate that there are innumerable strong factors supporting importance of flora and fauna. Consequently, I firmly opine that the government and individuals both should put their best foot together in order to save the trees and animals because it directly affect our environment.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...e trees and animals because it directly affect our environment.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, conversely, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49019607843 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98367981724 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4005611646 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220951378803 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549074940909 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653053013743 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121814278983 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496025713794 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...e trees and animals because it directly affect our environment.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, conversely, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49019607843 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98367981724 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4005611646 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220951378803 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549074940909 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653053013743 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121814278983 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496025713794 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.