The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006

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The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986, and 2006.

The chart compares the proportion of different ages of Australian women with their first-time pregnancies in 1966, 1986, and 2006.

It is clear that the percentage of women over 40 was the most modest among the six age groups. Furthermore, while the data for women giving birth to their first child from 25 to over 40 showed an upward trend, the figures for the age groups under 19 and 19-24 experienced a downward trend.

Starting at nearly 35% in 1966, the data for the women under 19 witnessed a decrease to just above one-tenth of the total proportion in 2006. Likewise, a similar pattern for females aged between 19 and 24 was the highest figure in 1966 (around 63%) followed by a fall of 26% in 1986 and dropped to just under 39% at the end of this period.

A similar pattern is observed in the changes of data for the 30-34 and 34-39 age groups during this period, which increased to around 45% and 30% in 2006 respectively. There were also slightly more women over 40 giving birth to their first child over the years, while the data for women aged 25-30 experienced a fluctuation, rising from around 35% in 1966 to 50% in 1986 before a drop to just under 40% at the end of the period.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, likewise, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48858447489 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3828792389 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51598173516 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0220359605 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.428571429 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2857142857 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266251785654 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142802416654 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935415615702 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198490162122 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799254246661 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.85 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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