The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations Statistics

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The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations Statistics.

The bar chart illustrates the comparison of the birth and the mortality rates in Switzerland over 850 year period, from 1970 to 2020. The units are measured in millions.

Overall, it is expected that the birth rate will follow an upward trend over the period given, on the other hand, the death rate will experience a downward trend.

The number of people who born in Switzerland will rise over time. From 1970 to 1980, the birth rate was constant at about 1.25 million, then it increased gradually. In 1990, it stood at 2.8 million, which was near about double then the previous years. After that, the population rate went up dramatically, and after 20 years, it reached 3 million. It is estimated that in 2020, it will peak at 3.2 million

In case of the death rate, from 1970 to 1990, the number of the deaths rose gradually, which increased from 1 million to 1.5 million. After that, there was a significant decrease observed. It decreased to 1.1 million in 2000, and it is predicted that, in 2020, the mortality rate will stand at 0.7 million.

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Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68817204301 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47531459278 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5799313009 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261374316864 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106898055812 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886102796141 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181467624706 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769520975219 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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