Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is undoubtedly true that the earnings of famous athletes is much higher than the other important professionals. That's why, it is a matter of argument that the remuneration which is paid to successful sportsperson is unfair, however, others believe that their earnings are fully justified. In my opinion, I believe that famous professional athletes deserve this huge amount of earnings.
Sport is a form of entertainment and sportsmen are its heroes. It not only entertain us but also release our mental stress and pain. Because of this, sports are a multi-billion dollars industry. The sportspersons play a crucial role to entertain our life. The hard work, persistence, and pain they suffers to amuse us are worth than money they earn. Sometimes they suffers a serious injuries. So, because of their dedication, they really deserve a high remuneration.
On the other hand, others think that it unfair to pay a huge amount money to the famous professional athletes than the other important professionals. The people of other professionalisms have a great contribution in the society. For instance, doctors spend their whole life to save others lives. In addition to this, researchers are also serve their lives for new inventions that help humankind and the society. Thus, they deserve higher earnings then the famous sports athletes. There are also other professionals like army, policemen, firefighters etc. who risk their life to save us. Therefore, these are the reasons why famous sportsmen’s earnings are questionable.
To sum up, entertainment is a one kind of drug to cure our mental stresses and pains, sports is one of them, and the sportspersons play a major role on this. So, I confer that because of their dedication, their earnings are fully legitimate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, kind of, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21951219512 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10666210191 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526132404181 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8134146745 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.35 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256460803956 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728357915497 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078619842635 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146162022328 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910432495156 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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